I can relate very much to what you've written here.

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There's a difference between knowing the path and walking the path.
--Morpheus

I'm sorry to hear that the feeling sucks!

I'll give you some affection! lol

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So long as your there,
So long as you want me,
In any which way,
So long as I can see you,
Standing before me,
I'll be here to reach out for you.

I love you Leon

Thanks.

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There's a difference between knowing the path and walking the path.
--Morpheus

You're welcomes

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So long as your there,
So long as you want me,
In any which way,
So long as I can see you,
Standing before me,
I'll be here to reach out for you.

I love you Leon

hun i can almost garentee that whatever you think you did you didn't do.

your such a sweet and sacrificing girl.

definately the males fault. definately.

This poem is probally my favorite of the ones you have recently written.

The form is freely written and pulled off so well.

The only suggestion that I have is that you put a period at the end of the entire thing, even if you do not want to add gramatical emphasis.

You capitilized the beginning of the poem, a period should follow

other then my little nitpicking, beautifully written poem

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To be or not to be?

meh, lets just eat some pancakes and call it a day.

Clubs: *RawEm0tion ~PoeticPeace ~PoeticPath ~da-library ~Writers-Guild-DA *degrees-of-love *WordCount *LiteraryUnderground

In a way its both of our faults, as is goes with most fights. Even if the problem started with something of my actions. That i know.

In some ways i am, but i'm usually very selfish. I"m very very selfish, and worst, inconsiderate about it. Thats what i'm told and, watching my behavior, i can see how they think that.

lol, thanks for trying to cheer me up It helped me a lot just to know that someone cares.

really? I think its probably one of my favorites of my recent too. written wise at least lol

XD thank you! I struggle with form sometimes, but i'm glad this one turned out well

hmmmm, i think you're right, and i did add in the period ^_^ lol

XD Thank you so very much

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So long as your there,
So long as you want me,
In any which way,
So long as I can see you,
Standing before me,
I'll be here to reach out for you.

I love you Leon

your welcome sweetie

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To be or not to be?

meh, lets just eat some pancakes and call it a day.

Clubs: *RawEm0tion ~PoeticPeace ~PoeticPath ~da-library ~Writers-Guild-DA *degrees-of-love *WordCount *LiteraryUnderground

yay!

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So long as your there,
So long as you want me,
In any which way,
So long as I can see you,
Standing before me,
I'll be here to reach out for you.

I love you Leon