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I’m the girl, who always makes the stupid mistakes,
But doesn’t give up on trying to make it better.

I’m the girl, who pushes out of concern,
But punishes her self for every bruise she leaves on you.

I'm the girl, who forgives and forgets all the harsh words at her,
but never ever forgets the harsh words at you.

I’m the girl, who shows you the calm face,
But cries when she’s all alone.

I’m the girl, who would beat her self up,
But tires to keep you from doing the same.

I’m the girl, who always thinks about you good or bad,
But never stops smiling at the thoughts of you.

I’m the girl, who smiles at your perfections,
But embraces your flaws with welcome arms.

I’m the girl, who’ll always support you,
But wont always agree with it.

I’m the girl, who will always love you,
But can’t find the words to tell you.


I’m the girl, that no one,
But you understand at all.
©2007-2010 *KikuFire
:iconkikufire:

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mmmm, I'll be adding to this on and off.

I Love You Leon, That Wont EVER Change.

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:iconnikumaru:
It's nice the way it is, the structure and the feelings... but I just love the way you propose to make it dynamic... organic even, a living, growing poem :aww:

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"There is always at least one warrior in every artist's studio." - Clive Barker, Visions of Heaven and Hell
:iconkikufire:
yeah? you think so? oh really? i didn't think of it like that, but i do like how you said that. a organically, living, growing poem ^_^

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Your the greatest babe,
perfections and imperfections,
I love you Leon,
I’ll love you and be with you to the end of all ends,
and though the birth of all births. :heart:
:iconnikumaru:
I'm glad you don't mind and even like the way I put that ^^; And the second one, same structure and organicality is very good too... me gusto :thumbsup:;)

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"There is always at least one warrior in every artist's studio." - Clive Barker, Visions of Heaven and Hell
:iconkikufire:
lol of course not. aww thank you ^_^

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Your the greatest babe,
perfections and imperfections,
I love you Leon,
I’ll love you and be with you to the end of all ends,
and though the birth of all births. :heart:
:iconnikumaru:
:phew: :lol: Thank you for putting these up :D

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"There is always at least one warrior in every artist's studio." - Clive Barker, Visions of Heaven and Hell
:iconkikufire:
ur welcomes ^^'

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Your the greatest babe,
perfections and imperfections,
I love you Leon,
I’ll love you and be with you to the end of all ends,
and though the birth of all births. :heart:
:iconangie-lalala:
aww i love this!

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There's no kindness in your eyes... the way look look at me, its just not right.
:iconkikufire:
Thanks ^^

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Your the greatest babe,
perfections and imperfections,
I love you Leon,
I’ll love you and be with you to the end of all ends,
and though the birth of all births. :heart:
:iconnikumaru:
:hug: Thanks again...

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"There is always at least one warrior in every artist's studio." - Clive Barker, Visions of Heaven and Hell

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