What is it like to be the other woman
To love and can’t be loved in return
To see and long but not achieve anything
To want to be with him but can’t replace her
Can’t keep up with what she does and still have his love
What is it like to be the other woman
Strong and yet not so strong
Deceiving and yet deceived
Blinded and yet knowing
The world you want trapped behind a closed window
And the rain is falling down on your side of the glass
Always standing on the outside of the loving house
Wishing that you were found out just that once
Too bad that it is raining out on your end
And it’s just a game inside of his handsome head
What is it like to be the other woman
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Just to be clear, I am NOT the other woman ^_^ lol
Idk why i wrote this, i guess i ws just inspried thats all. I haven't written anything in a while, at least i haven't posted it anyways. I have a few new stuff that i'm thinking about putting up, but those are progress stuff so yeah  I'll have to finish them. Hopefully since i'm curently in a creative mood i'll get it done! or not lol.Tell me what you think! i tried not to be too rhyming like with it, even though i do like them sometimes Comments
 "And the rain is falling down on your side of the glass"
Very pretty. I wish i'd said that! Great poem. -- i miss you (too?)  Wow .. this is really quite breathtaking I know that sort of feeling. While not being the other woman.. I found myself involved in a long distance relationship that due to circumstances brought about these feelings.
really amazingly written! -- "The greatest single cause of atheism in the world today Is Christians who acknowledge Jesus with their lips Then walk out the door and deny him by their lifestyle. That is what an unbelieving world simply finds unbelievable."  Very well done, you did well to put the feeling of lost inside this poem as to how "the other woman feels"
-- ~Your fears are mine then we are afraid together...~~~ ~~~ Please visit me and stay for a bit [link]  thank you! thanks, i always seem to do well when i dont actually plan it out and i just write ya know? in the moment of inspiration -- So long as your there, So long as you want me, In any which way, So long as I can see you, Standing before me, I'll be here to reach out for you.  I love you Leon awww thank you!
well thats good, its never good or okay to be the other woman Oh? how did you feel that way from a long distance relatoinship if you dont mind me asking?? thanks!-- So long as your there, So long as you want me, In any which way, So long as I can see you, Standing before me, I'll be here to reach out for you. I love you Leon I wouldn't think it would be!
thanks!-- So long as your there, So long as you want me, In any which way, So long as I can see you, Standing before me, I'll be here to reach out for you. I love you Leon i'm gussing you like that line best? thank you! lol well you can borrow it if you'd like!-- So long as your there, So long as you want me, In any which way, So long as I can see you, Standing before me, I'll be here to reach out for you. I love you Leon sure do!
aw thanks. if i do i will give full credit -- i miss you (too?) |
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